Very pretty beginning. It gets going pretty quickly into something I didn't expect at all. I love the beat! I think I see where you're going with this and I think you just about have it. I think some more variety in that bass during the more quiet parts without the vocals could help bring the listener in. There are some really pretty harmonies in there. I love what you did at 2:32-2:46. You took a chance and I like to think it paid off. I agree with a lot of what JRTH said.